Membership Sales Page

Jenette of Woodcraft Blueprints Membership came to me with 1 goal: Increase the conversion rate on her sales page. 

In 2 hours, I:

  • Reviewed her current sales page

  • Made copy improvements

  • Sent her a video with suggestions to complete the page without repeating past mistakes

 

How we got it all done

Jenette sent over valuable information for me to review before I started writing. 


This included:

  • Her current sales page

  • Notes on what she wanted to keep/change

  • Her messaging guide

Her super thorough ideas helped me pull it all together efficiently.

 

The Roadblocks

Jenette’s previous sales page had a LOT of text on it. 

And a lot of that real estate was ‘problem’ language. 

It wasn’t a full rip and replace, though!

 

The ‘Finished’ Product

Can You Write This For Me is a timed service, and I wanted to give Jenette as much as possible. 

That’s why I started with an outline of what she needed on the page, and left out all the previous fluff. 

Then, I went back and started writing new copy by creating an Above The Fold section that was far more descriptive (and concise!) than her existing one. 

Finally, I was able to fill in about 50% of the copy on the page - the rest of it, she will finesse or copy/paste from her old site.

 

Next Steps

Jenette runs a super successful membership. She’s busy! 

So handing off the strategy, format, and some copy on this page was a HUGE time saver for her. 

Next, Jenette can purchase another hour or two of Can You Write This For Me at a discounted rate, OR take a couple of hours to fill in what’s missing herself. 

All in all, she was able to fast forward the process of rewriting this sales page. 


NOTE: Her page was only converting at 1% 🫨. This document will be updated once she’s driven traffic to the new copy with comparisons.

 

Ready to rock your sales page?

Shannon Pruitt

Word & Design Lover. General Officer of All Things (G.O.A.T) at Shannon Pruitt & Co. where we help modern entrepreneurs design a website that feels like home and pinpoints exactly what they want to say. Also loves a good glass of wine at night.

https://sundaymusedesign.com
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