Welcome Sequence Emails
Melissa, the money coach behind Melissa Mitt Financials, recently had an influx of email subscribers - hooray! 🎉
She wanted to be sure she’d stand out against the noise in the online space while getting calls booked (because calls lead to sales in her world!).
The quick-n-dirty deets:
1 hour of Can You Write This For Me
Her emails were written, but she didn’t think they ‘popped’
I edited, revised, and expanded her 4-email sequence!
Wait… 4 emails in just one hour!?
Yup! It really helped that Melissa had the emails written, even though they needed a lot of work.
I was able to take what she had and either edit it down, build upon it, or make it better.
An ‘oopsie’
When I was done editing the 4 emails, Melissa sent me a message. She’d forgotten to tell me a crucial piece of information that changed the direction of the emails 🤦
Fortunately, the new flow of the emails made it easy for Melissa to swap out the right information and make small changes, while still getting the full benefit of everything I wrote!
The final product
Melissa originally had 4 long emails, each with different ‘purposes’ - but they didn’t really flow.
In 1 hour, I:
✅ Turned those 4 emails into 5, and they flowed perfectly!
✅ Wrote subject lines that will get opened
✅ Recorded an audio for her, explaining why some changes were made so that she can write better copy in the future
